maybe this time ill get it

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Open Poetry #38

maybe this time ill get it

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-08-03 01:02 AM

feeling the sun beat upon my face
take me back to that special place

the feeling of joy the joy of
this ever lasting laughter of your
smile

even if its just for a little while
i sit here and stand brave and strong
with you in mind and hope i get
it righ this time

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2006-08-03 09:46 PM

I think you touched on something that many of us hope at some time in our lives. I hope it too - for you and for me. I like this poem because it speaks to my dreams and desires.

aziza

SusieQ
Junior Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 40
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-08-04 01:44 AM

You touched me.

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2006-08-04 12:27 PM

thanks guys its about this new realationship im in and im hoping thingis go well.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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