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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-08-02 09:46 AM


it is not as often now
that my mind has blurred
to another asphalt sunrise

nor my studying for blood
tests or contemplation
of the change of anything

other than the lanes
to faster ones
or the inflatuation passing

of another moment in high heels
or one in bare foot confusion
on the same side walking

in my opposing directions


_____________

daark

scribblenote: doing the do..wysiwyg


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-08-02 09:54 AM


simple, no questioning, just the way things go...or come, or leave...all part of the show....

or

as Lilly Tomlin said, many times...

and that's the truth...thhhhhhhhh

  cycle man, your revin that handbar today...

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-08-02 09:59 AM


ms leej...yep, can't find my sorry shirt, sides' I think it belonged to someone else anyway..thanks for the read lady friend
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3 posted 2006-08-02 12:35 PM


A lost shirt!  Boy did I take a wrong turn!
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-08-02 03:39 PM


ms myst..thanks lady!!
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2006-08-02 10:44 PM



of another moment in high heels
or one in bare foot confusion
on the same side walking

*********************************
sometimes i like that walk on the wild side,
heels on, walking on some guys wildside
and then i like the barefoot and freestyle
romp thru the hay

SusieQ
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6 posted 2006-08-03 01:09 AM


This is amazing poetry.
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-08-03 07:33 AM


ms inky, you always did have a sexy way
of walking..thanks ms


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ms susieQ, thanks to you for the review

aziza
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8 posted 2006-08-03 10:52 PM


I read your poems out loud - the words just fall into place as I hear them.  I am a fan!

aziza

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-08-04 07:49 AM


ms az, thank you for your eyes and lips whispering
Klassy Lassy
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10 posted 2006-08-04 11:05 PM


I must be wsyiwyging.   Isn't that a way to chart things?...perhaps exploring  different directions to leave a smile in mind along with an asterisk and a note to visit again sometime.  As long as my fingers can do the walking, I can find my way back to your poems.  It's got to be a Gemini thing, opposing directions,  but either way it takes pretty feet to do barefootin' or heels well.  sigh...
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