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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-08-02 08:45 AM


You Will Always Be


I adore you
it is true
did I say
that I loved you
you are
the silver lining
beneath dark
storms shining
and take away
my very breath
I shall feel
this way till death
you are never
away too far
close my eyes
and there you are
hearts soar
with wings of birds
for you are the thoughts
of my words
and when you
and I are apart
it is you
that holds my heart
and as simple
as this may be
you are always
part of me

just some words cut from
the diary of my heart



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-08-02 09:32 AM


makes me all warm and cozy
XOx Uriah xOX
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2 posted 2006-08-02 10:08 AM


I dont know if this is a write of adoration, like Rumi declaring his love of God.
or...  if it is for a VERY fortunate someone.
It works either way.
Wonderful write !

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-08-02 10:11 AM


Lovely ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

aziza
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4 posted 2006-08-02 11:26 PM


So beautiful!

SusieQ
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5 posted 2006-08-03 01:07 AM



Very beautiful. I would love to feel that way.

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