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boucherie time (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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quilt hanging on porch railin’
charcoal man
knows

no shadow hair lady
no mess of
he’ll be back
red poutin’ lip bent to heart
or pink shell toes

gone
only gone
and the vague smell of
anger

some say
her Papa drove his char
right to the porch railin’
carried his doucette home
to her princess shoes

some say
she walked the dusty river road
barefoot again
catfish wrapped around the warm rock
of brogan wearing man
from the boats

it don matter

his lady
left charcoal man a bed gift
congo
wrapped warm
waitin’

c'est tout
© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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femme de péché dansant son dé...and a congo too...hmmmm now I am missin ol creole town, enjoyed it lady one
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how I wish I could write as this.
The Lady
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femmes fâchées...ahh Stranger,
what you gonna do?
thank you


I'm glad you enjoyed it
seraphin
thank you
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


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The Lady
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Thank you so very
much Karilea!
I've enjoyed having
you along.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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wow
The Lady
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I think she was
very angry, Helen.
All ladies understand
that, yes?

Thank you.

aziza
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I can see them and I certainly can feel them.  Now, I think I need them.
The Lady
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Take them aziza.
Enjoy.
Thank you so much
for sticking with me.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


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WOW!!  Brava!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

The Lady
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Oh Nancy! Thank you
so much!

passing shadows
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displaced


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wonderful!!! wonderful!!!
The Lady
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Thank you passing shadows.

OwlSA
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Woweee!  Magnifique!  Kate and Cajun blended into a masterful and brilliant climax!  

- Owl
The Lady
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thank you so much
Diana

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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so Good!!!!!!!!!!!
The Lady
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Why, thank you
Windwalker!
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


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You know, she'd never go back to those princess shoes.  I even know that.

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