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Open Poetry #38

love the ultimate gift.

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

0 posted 2006-08-01 11:13 AM

My love you have developed
Now desire stirs in me
Like the raging of a fire
All my passions you have set free
And knowing that as soul mates
We will taste eternity
A teacher who takes the difficult
And simply explains to me
I have never met anyone
With such sincerity
How I cherish this great gift
That you have given me
The ways of love are awesome
All this she rains on me
I am awe struck by your rainbow
So please never set me free
With you I know the future
Is what they call our destiny
You are my best friend and my true love, now do you see?
It is you that broke the chains
And from bondage set me free
My companion in this life
And for all eternity.

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

1 posted 2006-08-01 11:20 AM

So beautiful and heartfelt. I enjoyed this very much.

They aren't flaps; they're my face!
- The Mighty Boosh

AlexanderPoetry
Junior Member

since 2006-07-31

Posts 30

2 posted 2006-08-01 12:59 PM

Nice to read a poem about the upside of life. Well put together, and says everything it needs to..

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

3 posted 2006-08-01 02:57 PM

thank you for reading it i enjojed writting this one.

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