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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2006-08-01 08:43 AM



Sleepless, restless, you are
in my mind, my heart.
To you i give my
love, for you i
will be there, in every
kiss, every silk soft
touch, every thrilling
finger trail on skin.
fervently, passionately, we will
inhabit each others dreams,
under azure skies,
cast shadows of white
clouds on the ground,
racing as quick as
our beating, loving, hearts.
Fall into my depth,
let me gaze into
your darkly polished Hazel
eyes and fall, just
fall into your heart
of love so full.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2006-08-01 08:46 AM


wow


now that is passion!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-08-01 09:22 AM


Absolutely beautiful Phil!
She is one lucky lady!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

the quell
Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144
Liverpool, UK
3 posted 2006-08-01 09:31 AM


You really captured something here; so raw and powerful, but gentle. Lovely piece.

You've gone wrong! You've gone wrong in your mind-tank!
                 - Vince Noir

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-08-01 03:34 PM




Oh, wow! Sigh...  
fall with him B!
He's amazing.

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