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themute
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0 posted 2006-08-01 05:01 AM


How luckily for me
That by looking in a tree
I saw god and in his hands
Where six angels within lands
Seldom seen and seldom known
Seldom walked in seldom blown
Winds of change that howl the name
Of ancient wisdoms that proclaim  
In times of doubt the searching mind
Deep as darkness fast will find
That they are of the divine
And so it's now for me
Looking in the tree
I'm finding god
Finding god


I am the two-toed wanderer

[This message has been edited by themute (08-02-2006 02:18 AM).]

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lace_of_light
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since 2006-08-02
Posts 44

1 posted 2006-08-02 03:14 PM


I like it even though it's a little out of the ordinary. I can't really visualize finding god, but it's an odd approach. I like it!

Thank you for listening to this (if you did)

"areyouinorareyouout? eitherwayyoucan'twin." he said. "butthefallwillbefantasticandwhat'sleftisnothinglessthanperfection"

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-08-02 03:28 PM


smiling here
tree wisdom
the ents knew

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