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charcoal man IV
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charcoal man IV |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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charcoal man steps out to the early dusk soft leather feet shined Panama a’tilt sharp crease in legs sun pink egg yolk stuck to the sky lights way to esplanade bench he waggles cigar in wry mouth eyes searching lust fingers drumming envie loud giggles draw near swing purple and red skirts charcoal man keeps his fire banked low chuckles demon laugh skirts flame around him so comely he murmurs new stepins sun a red slit lying on the horizon waiting to slam shut charcoal man takes himself home he knows his lady will pass him pair of eyes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It's okay, Karilea? Shall I go on? |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Perfection and I am in love (or is that lust?) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you aziza and I think it's lust.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cigar store panaman only the tiptoes can look into his eyes enjoyed your penspeak ms |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Of course you must go on! I am enjoying this man of imagination very much! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm with Sunshine |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Stranger. Sunshine, thank you for taking this ride with me. I have enjoyed having you along. I think it’s time to wrap it up. Yes? I’m glad you like it passing shadows. Hang on. |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
Very descriptive. I like it. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you so much, Susie. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nope. Once the charcoal is in your blood... there's no way to dissolve the heat it brings. Let it simmer... he'll come back to your dreams.... and you'll write of him. I know. Just check out my Konrad series sometime...which ultimately stemmed from another great poet here at PiP...who wrote of Iambe.... You've given birth to a new poet character... long may he reign. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I do hope he will return! Love it! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Hmmmmmm... interesting concept Karilea... especially for a têtu woman we shall see I will read the series you suggested thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Nancy! Looks like the charcoal man has a following. Smile. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Superbly penned - and painted - as always. - Owl |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Must have been love because I can't get him off my mind. A |
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