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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-07-30 11:48 PM





she hasn’t looked back
since the moist day
she packed
her little princess shoes away
followed charcoal man  
barefoot
down dusty river road  
by day she prays to the virgin  
and the little rose saint  
late of night  
lightning winks
storm spins her
true worship rings the air
she slips gris gris
under his tongue
tangles pink shell toes
in bed clothes
pulls

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-07-30 11:59 PM


yep, I can see this one,
a willing shadow dancer
hot cool write, Lady

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-07-31 12:06 PM


You have me with each word you write.
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-07-31 12:08 PM




Thank you Kacy!


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-07-31 12:09 PM


Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-07-31 12:09 PM




Thank you aziza.

the tale continues...


The Lady
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6 posted 2006-07-31 12:10 PM




Thank you James.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2006-07-31 07:10 AM



Did Midnitesun say
hot cool write?

She's correct.

Sizzlin' here...


Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-07-31 07:20 AM


lady one, enjoyed this window view
dusty chevy with finger prints
making symbols of spell bound

The Lady
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9 posted 2006-07-31 03:59 PM




Thank you so much Karilea.
Thank you Stranger.


Ceinwyn
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10 posted 2006-08-01 12:27 PM


you've caught my attention!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
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11 posted 2006-08-01 05:39 AM


love this journey!
The Lady
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12 posted 2006-08-01 12:52 PM





Thank you Kristen.
I appreciate your reply.

Like all journeys it must
come to an end, yes,
passing shadows?
Thank you for coming along.

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
13 posted 2011-03-27 12:25 PM


"she hasn’t looked back
since the moist day
she packed
her little princess shoes away
followed charcoal man  
barefoot
down dusty river road"

Heck, I say -- I'd follow that man in barefeet too.  Who needs princess shoes with a man like that?

A

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