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The Lady
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0 posted 07-30-2006 11:48 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady




she hasnít looked back
since the moist day
she packed
her little princess shoes away
followed charcoal man  
barefoot
down dusty river road  
by day she prays to the virgin  
and the little rose saint  
late of night  
lightning winks
storm spins her
true worship rings the air
she slips gris gris
under his tongue
tangles pink shell toes
in bed clothes
pulls
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1 posted 07-30-2006 11:59 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

yep, I can see this one,
a willing shadow dancer
hot cool write, Lady
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2 posted 07-31-2006 12:06 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

You have me with each word you write.
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3 posted 07-31-2006 12:08 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



Thank you Kacy!

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Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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Thank you aziza.

the tale continues...

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Thank you James.
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Did Midnitesun say
hot cool write?

She's correct.

Sizzlin' here...

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8 posted 07-31-2006 07:20 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

lady one, enjoyed this window view
dusty chevy with finger prints
making symbols of spell bound
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Thank you so much Karilea.
Thank you Stranger.

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you've caught my attention!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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love this journey!
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Thank you Kristen.
I appreciate your reply.

Like all journeys it must
come to an end, yes,
passing shadows?
Thank you for coming along.
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"she hasnít looked back
since the moist day
she packed
her little princess shoes away
followed charcoal man  
barefoot
down dusty river road"

Heck, I say -- I'd follow that man in barefeet too.  Who needs princess shoes with a man like that?

A
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