How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #38 Archive
 his lady
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

his lady

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 12-26-2005
Posts 7633
The Southwest


0 posted 07-30-2006 03:47 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady


she lies on dream sheets  
shadow hair calling on pillow
brings hand to mouth
bites
craves long pull of sugar water

pitches
sighs
wait so hard
it stains the close air

from the empty of her bed
she hears desire
droning at her porch light      
lone accordion
playing her heart    
engorged flower unfolding  
desperate to display its bloom  

charcoal man present
in his smug absence

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Caelestus
since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


1 posted 07-30-2006 03:49 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


What the mind does.
You are portraying quite
the character...

and I am enjoying your journey!



The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 12-26-2005
Posts 7633
The Southwest


2 posted 07-30-2006 03:56 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



It is wonderful or
maybe terrible
what the mind does
Karilea...

Thank you for taking the
journey with me.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Caelestus
since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


3 posted 07-30-2006 03:59 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


It is the only way
we grow.

Learn,

and write on.

aziza
Member Elite
since 07-09-2006
Posts 3000
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!


4 posted 07-30-2006 07:25 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

I love how you write.

she lies on dream sheets  
shadow hair calling on pillow
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 09-21-1999
Posts 28608
California


5 posted 07-30-2006 07:36 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lady

The imagery with in this, lights the emotion in this poem...and I feel it.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


6 posted 07-30-2006 07:39 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I'm in awe

so wonderfully written!
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


7 posted 07-30-2006 07:44 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

So wonderfully emotion packed.
Well done!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

seraphin
Senior Member
since 09-24-2000
Posts 997
Michigan


8 posted 07-30-2006 10:39 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

My Lord! You are so darn talented! I'm hooked.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 12-26-2005
Posts 7633
The Southwest


9 posted 07-30-2006 11:30 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady




thank you so much, aziza
I appreciate your reply

I’m glad you feel it Martie…
thank you

passing shadows, thank you for
your kind reply

thank you Nancy
hugs to you

thank you so much, seraphin


Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 05-18-2001
Posts 29020
Gaia


10 posted 07-30-2006 11:56 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

wickedly wonderful

am enjoying this mini-series
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 12-26-2005
Posts 7633
The Southwest


11 posted 07-31-2006 12:06 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


Wicked is only
part of the story,
Kacy.

Thank you.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 03-19-2001
Posts 13647
West Coast


12 posted 07-31-2006 07:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

sounds like she hears the highways
rubbing legs on the windows
enjoyed the music of this one
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 12-26-2005
Posts 7633
The Southwest


13 posted 07-31-2006 04:00 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



Thank you, Stranger.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite
since 07-09-2000
Posts 2238
Baltimore, MD


14 posted 08-01-2006 12:28 AM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

yeah you've got me hook line and sinker with this one

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 12-26-2005
Posts 7633
The Southwest


15 posted 08-01-2006 12:49 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



Thank you so much
Kristen!

Alison
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 01-27-2008
Posts 9055
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


16 posted 03-27-2011 12:23 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I am still in love with this poetic story ~ I think you are one reason that "aziza" stayed at PiP.  She had to keep reading ... and then one day it seemed only right to be "Alison" among such good people.

Thank you, Kate.

Alison
The Lady will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #38 >> his lady Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors