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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-07-29 07:59 AM



The wine sits, both then aging
wondering the taste of time.
Will it be unhindered by
the past of present climb?

The distance within reach of
a morning song and you,
when air again is heavy
with the longing I once knew.

The moisture reigns with thunder
thoughts and more of less cascade.
These words in solitude press on.
Now meaningless, they're laid

Upon the constant of their find,
those moments held within.
The wine sits, both us aging in
surround of silent "been".

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
1 posted 2006-07-29 09:01 AM


lovely lovely
you have such a way
with words

I love reading you

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2006-07-29 10:37 PM


2 grapes
l bottle of wine
a field between them

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2006-07-30 03:38 AM


M-lady, I think this is one of my favorites of yours.  It is very lyrical and has so much meaning.  Saving it.  *hugs*....jo
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