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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-29 01:29 AM


Words wrapping, sinuous
sensuous, pliable, miable
rhyming in tune
silly with no meaning
scribbles unread, truths unsaid
A song. A dance.
loss of conscious thought
loneliness it brought.
consider the rage
put fear at rest
Delusions and illusions
woven in dreams.

aziza

[This message has been edited by aziza (07-30-2006 03:50 AM).]

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elisalie16
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since 2006-07-12
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new jersey
1 posted 2006-07-29 02:16 AM


loved it very much.
poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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2 posted 2006-07-29 06:53 PM


fast and moving, just let down by the number of spelling eroors

a poet who cares

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-07-29 07:52 PM


You know, I have been saving my poems and was amazed at the errors that you speak of.  I write fast and then wander away from it - guess that won't happen again without a good spell check first.  My brain spells pretty well, but my fingers are pretty damned stupid.

Thank you both for your comments.

aziza

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