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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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0 posted 2006-07-29 12:37 PM



My pillow beckons,
“Come to bed”
“I’ve a cool spot, to rest your head”.

My comforter,
Knows what’s right,
And offers softness for the night.

The open window,
Whispers in drone,
“But dear, you’ll still be all alone”.



© Copyright 2006 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-07-29 12:54 PM


It's a lovely poem and I will take bets that this is a temporary situation.

aziza

Venus1974
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 79
Tennessee, USA
2 posted 2006-07-29 12:56 PM


Feeling alone is a lousy feeling...yes thats true...but, you know sometimes we are just better off alone...even if only for now...we can learn to be happy with ourselves and then we wont feel so alone anymore...just a thought Take care

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-07-29 06:07 PM


yeah... like all you need is someone snoring LOL

I enjoy sleeping alone myself

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
4 posted 2006-07-29 06:41 PM


I find it hard to sleep without the snoring
*sad smile*

lovely write

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-07-29 11:53 PM




"all alone" can be a
sad situation, seraphin
but "sometimes alone" can
be rather nice...

enjoyed this poem

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