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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-07-28 10:42 AM


Judgment Day

Judgment day is every day
Every moment in every way
There are no files to file mistakes
Nor are there files for birthday cakes

Each pixel is a one way trip
A grain of sand in endless drip
It’s only in the mind we buy
A thread within the needles eye

Illusion is our fantasy
Illusion is eternity
And kings and queens find destiny
In common given progeny

It’s here, our given Eden’s garden
There’s no forgiveness or pardon
Do to other as you would have done
For you are the father and the son

And so the circle makes its way
Around, around, to judgment day


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seraphin
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1 posted 2006-07-28 10:57 AM


I love this.
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2 posted 2006-07-28 11:00 AM


Sy, a 1derful write
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3 posted 2006-07-28 07:58 PM


so true, so very true

Hope you are having a good night Sy

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-07-28 08:34 PM


seraphin
Thank you so much.

Interloper
Thank you for the read and reply.

passing,
Doing the best I can.

aziza
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5 posted 2006-07-28 10:41 PM


I like this a lot and find a lot of truth in your words.

aziza

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6 posted 2006-07-28 10:55 PM


As good as it gets...and equates back to this...
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Dear, dear Sy....

You've give us so much...
I can only hope we add to your days
as you add to ours.








Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-07-29 08:14 AM


Sunshine
Did I ever tell you, you are the gold in my mornings sunrise.

aziza
Your read and reply is my pleasure, thank you.

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