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cold stone's soothsation
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cold stone's soothsation |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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downtown in short skirt leathering late enough never matters when the dallas boys walk their eyes leashless above their mouths but they can't buy the happy served at the demon's den the slippery snake cooler that sooths the belly skin deeper than just the mind but leaves cocoa wants panting for a more than a swallow worth of carryout reefer truck varity and perhaps reservations too down on the sin suede willing for tommorrow nights opening in a dancer's hall permission twenty minutes before closing time ______________ daark scribblenote: downtown between the scenes or perhaps just a visit to the local cold stone |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
i really don't think i understand this one at all, although it was very interesting to read. could you explain it a little maybe? --anne |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
this one is immersed in the neon lights of aftermidnight alleys~ as seen from the back of a hoawwg~~ niiice |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms anne, thanks for the read and comments perhaps I should not explain, but just go with what you feel, it is probably on track. ______________ bel1e, thanks lil pan', yes those grooves between the night place shiveroo's |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Once again, wonderful. I am truly a fan of yours. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serafriend, thanks so much for the reviews and comments. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how do you do it? time and time again? may i?  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...please doit repeatedly please, thanks hon |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aha, and now you've made my crave a coldstone's and much, much more you are the warm and the chill wrapped up in poetic thrill massaging my brain and then some |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what time exactly does the demon's den close stranger? happy sounds good to me |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
All I know is I like. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..a little chillyrock would be nice yes..a pleasure to tempt your thoughts lady friend, thanks to you. ________________ lady one..it never closes for some, is never open for others, but for one with out reservations it is quite the stepdown..thanks for the eyes _________________ ms aziza, I just thank you and smile |
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