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seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

0 posted 2006-07-26 10:33 PM

Take my words
Not sharply
For to temper them
I try
And if in them
You find rhythm
Hold them as
A lullaby
To comfort
Come the bleeding black
Of one more
lonely night
take my words
not sharply
for I speak
of what is right.

Take my hand
Not firmly
Let my fingers
Lie in grace
Upon your open palm
Against your
Shadowed face
And hold it
For no longer
Than my heart
Is blessed to beat
Take my hand
For but a moment
While forever
Would be sweet.

Take my life
For now, forever
From this morn
‘Til winters frost
Embrace it
Come the warmth of spring
And when falls
Leaves are tossed
With careless abandon
Blown by whispered winds
About
Take my life
For now, forever
Given freely
Without doubt.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-07-30 12:02 PM

Yes! A lovely piece of work.

"Take my life
For now, forever
From this morn
‘Til winters frost
Embrace it
Come the warmth of spring
And when falls
Leaves are tossed"

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

2 posted 2006-07-30 12:05 PM

beautiful beautiful

I love these lines

**************
Take my hand
Not firmly
Let my fingers
Lie in grace
Upon your open palm
Against your
Shadowed face
And hold it
For no longer
Than my heart
Is blessed to beat
Take my hand
For but a moment
While forever
Would be sweet.
****************

made my heart sigh

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2006-07-30 04:01 AM

Your words are beautiful.

Thank you.
aziza

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-07-30 04:36 AM

Enjoyed...James

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

5 posted 2006-07-30 09:51 AM

Thank you, all. It seems so much of my memory is caught up in the past, heart held steel-grip tight, that I forget there is always a chance in tomorrow.

here's to tomorrow. ~sandra

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