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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2006-07-26 09:24 PM


Captivate  me
Steal my thoughts
like a bandit
aim your bow and arrow
straight at my heart
Kiddnap me
into the night that has been unkind
for too long...
Tie me down
to your sweet promises
Tell me nothing but the truth
regardless how harsh the reality
Capture my insecurities
Press yourself against my heart firmly
Please don't let me go
when I try to run away from you
be the answer
to the questions of uncertainty
cast me gently
into morning
Take me to the place so holy....



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2006 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2006-07-27 02:34 AM


wow! I hope it all comes true for you  
elisalie16
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since 2006-07-12
Posts 118
new jersey
2 posted 2006-07-27 04:01 AM


i really like this, and feel like i can relate to it. very very nice!
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