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BugBuggy
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0 posted 2006-07-26 07:15 PM


The scent of pine rests on the air,
There is the sound of water slapping agianst
the shore.
Birds are winging thru the sky,
The sun is shining bright and high.
Summer has come to Camelot,
oh, to be there once agian.
In your arms, in loves embrace,
to feel your touch, to see your face.
longing for you and our Camelot.

BUG
7-25-06

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the quell
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1 posted 2006-07-26 08:14 PM


I love it!! And it was made all the better by a reference to Camelot! I love the first line especially, nice image

You've gone wrong; you've gone wrong in your mind-tank
                 - Vince Noir

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-07-27 03:07 AM


very pretty
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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3 posted 2006-07-27 08:42 AM


Very pretty.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

BugBuggy
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4 posted 2006-07-28 10:22 PM


thank you for the very kind words...you are all so wonderful

BugBuggy

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