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when life getting tough
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when life getting tough |
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Silex7 New Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 4 |
this is my first time to post here,..i liked many poems posted here i decided to start over one,.. it's really a weak one coz my english is simple,..but take it as start..i called it when life getting tough.. ************* Life is just a big pain,with a pencil in the brain you get it all or lose it or passing with no gain! Just do what you have to even if u were scared or afraid to.. Live like a king but dont be a stink because if you gut a wealth, thats not all what you think! Charity is a blessing and a step to the lord but money with a greed is a big dammit word! Never be tricked at life amusement may be one day u will get your achievment Money is your servant not your master if you put this in verse, it will be a disaster I wrote this poems just to reminder so don’t think thats fumes or hard to remember.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 after getting pastsome "rough" spots I have to say, I truly enjoyed this read! Keep throwing your ideas out, polished or not. Polish the phrases as you can, but don't stop the ink from flowing. |
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Silex7 New Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 4 |
thanks for ure reply  , i really appreciate that..iam not gonna stop writing,..and this poems i wrote it according to the situation i put in.. thanks again.. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Silex7, Thanks for your poem. Some good reminders. You are brave to write when you have not yet mastered english. I saw past your errors. Best of luck to you and welcome! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Silex7 New Member
since 2006-06-15
Posts 4 |
ure reply is highly appreciated.. thanks, and i won't stop learning english and writing these poems will suppotring me.. thanks again |
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