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0 posted 2006-07-25 01:58 PM



Hiding safely in the olive branches,
out of sight, out of reach.

That's where I found sanctuary
as a child of Mother Earth.
That's where I find it today,
in the olive trees
of my mind.

We were just young children then,
my brothers and sisters,
but we fought bravely in
"The Olive Wars."
Sometimes we would shoot those
rock-hard little olives at each other.
I called them
nature bullets.
I usually won those battles,
being the smallest, the fastest,
the most intense, the best tree climber
and sharpest shooter of the neighborhood.
I always knew there was something special
about those olive branches.
No matter how far out on a limb I went
they seemed to hold me up.
Only once do I remember falling,
and that was when I let go.

In my dreams I still cling
to those olive branches,
for much the same reasons now.
They still offer me
a sense of security,
a sense of hope.
As for those Olive Wars?
I discovered at a tender age
they are not very much fun,
and make such a terrible mess.

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-07-25 02:00 PM


I just loved this!  Most of all these two lines should be on a plate, and everyone should hang the darn thing on their wall.  Well done m'friend.
quote:
Only once do I remember falling,
and that was when I let go.

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2 posted 2006-07-25 02:12 PM


Thank you so much, Sharon, for reading and replying. My muse wouldn't cooperate when I asked for lavendar sacheted writes today, or smiling moon beams over surf and sand.
You know me well enough by now to know I shall never again let go of my end of the olive branch.

Bridget Shenachie
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3 posted 2006-07-25 09:16 PM


I could see the story of this, Kacy.  It speaks volumes of the wisdom gained in a child's play.

Shenachie

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4 posted 2006-07-25 11:48 PM




"In my dreams I still cling
to those olive branches"

We must never let go of the
olive branches, Kacy. Thank
you for this. It's lovely.

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5 posted 2006-07-26 12:00 PM


thank you Bridget, and Kate
glad you are still
holding on too

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6 posted 2006-07-26 12:55 PM


I love poems that speak of memories.  They offer so much about someone - and this poem makes me like you so much.  Thank you for offering a piece of you to all of us.

aziza

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7 posted 2006-07-26 01:01 AM


aziza, thank you, so very much, for reading, and your heartfelt comment.
Anytime you want to sit the olive branch, let me know.

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