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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2006-07-25 08:52 AM


view from home

budding on dream beach…again

memories drip lazily through fingers

of overjoyed to be here sand

impression disburses social visits


lethargic midsummer’s warmth…

there

is

water

moistening lips of

cool green foliage

rippling clear dress

in azure

mind mapping

diluted evening purple swept

across the sky

in the afterglow

reinventing

what our souls

want for us…


peninsula billows Darwin’s

tropical breeze

softly murmuring

the images to us

“you are here”

"you are here"


purest ecstasy

sitting

with questions

shaping

our world

tapping

inner resources
practicing

the honoring of learning


frustrations...

we marvel their essence to


humming senses

of irrelevance

sighing world’s topography

animates the heart & heat of

nature’s undemanding sensation

filaments prose

reconfiguring existing space

soaring central

atrium asserts thought images


jungle of palms

stringing fingers of hammocks

surrounded with pearly azure blue

hidden strengths smother

everything

is seen without seeing


flesh spheres with dolphins

      in apreene

moist air realm

sluggish nucleus

worthy

to be received

this

holistic oil

immersed in details

of texture


sparkling fate

taking place inside

foreground

melding

with background

today’s medium

shaping implications


monochrome &

wide

like a billion

diamonds

glimmering

the surface of sea

like an enticing afternoon

open frames

in full view

where memories of...

awaken

ravage

the child in me...

until we are

only white hot glares


footnote: a very nice dream with last evening


© Copyright 2006 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2006-07-25 08:55 AM


HOWDIE LJ...
Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
2 posted 2006-07-25 07:53 PM


Lovely images--very sensual read.  I'd like to dream of this!

Shenachie

Decaflame
Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

3 posted 2006-07-30 09:45 AM


atrium asserts thought images


jungle of palms

stringing fingers of hammocks

surrounded with pearly azure blue

hidden strengths smother

everything

is seen without seeing

~*~

Am so glad you didn't rip this one away
from its revery...

seems I owe you a letter, too...


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2006-07-30 10:09 AM


LeeJ

The imagery within sometimes beats the real thing...or is it the real thing?  Hi girlfriend!  

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
5 posted 2006-07-30 10:32 AM


This is the first time I've printed out someones work to keep on my desk. Thank you.
divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
6 posted 2006-07-30 11:18 AM


simply beautiful, LeeJ
peaceful and calming

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

7 posted 2006-07-31 04:48 PM


Awe-some write!

Eric

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