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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2006-07-25 07:38 AM


Have you ever watched a spider
Inside a window clear?
His prey is on the outside
Without a single fear.

The spider is perplexed,
He see's his prey right there
But weaves his web for naught
And captures only air

The bug just laughs and worries not
The spider paces to and fro
But gets some satisfaction
From a fly-bye of a crow.

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bel1e
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1 posted 2006-07-25 07:39 AM


lol~

very creative writing~~~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-07-25 07:40 AM




Your observations are still top-rate, Toe!

Good to see you, young man!




suthern
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3 posted 2006-07-25 09:29 AM


Well... lookie here what the cat dragged in! LOL (and you know I have plenty of cats! LOL)

I loved this, Toe... from the title on! *S*

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-07-25 09:31 AM


LOL yeah

nice to see you Toe

LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-07-25 09:31 AM



SmartChick
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6 posted 2006-07-25 10:08 AM



the quell
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7 posted 2006-07-25 10:19 AM


lol! Very well-observed

Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen,
I see not the stars, but the darkness between

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