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vandana
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0 posted 2006-07-24 05:34 PM




Baby, Come Back
I miss those arms
Around me
I miss those days of love
Please come back to me
I miss you too much
When night comes
I feel lonely
Without love
Please come back to me
Please come back
I will not say anything
Today
Weather is looking fine
You can be mine
You can come home
Baby
I love you too much
You are the one for me
Come back to me
Let us forget the past
Why should we think?
Of our sorrow
Let us think of tomorrow
There is thousand words to say
Baby
Come back to me


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2006-07-24 05:45 PM


A graceful poem of longing, dear Vandana.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-07-24 08:19 PM


I sometimes wish my honey would come back...but then, why should she if she doesn't want to...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-07-24 09:31 PM


good poem vandana

good to read you again

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-07-24 10:02 PM




Almost a song vandana... very bluesy.
I love it.

the quell
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since 2006-07-19
Posts 144
Liverpool, UK
5 posted 2006-07-24 10:16 PM


Aw, that was gorgeous. It seemed truly heartfelt. I'm impressed
dreamdc
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since 2005-11-11
Posts 54
Utah, USA
6 posted 2006-07-24 11:32 PM


These are lyrics to a song we all want to sing every once in a while. If only it were so eays to start over, forget the past, and just be in love, right? God, I wish...
Very nice poem...Thank you for sharing with us all.

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