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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-07-24 03:40 PM

A mind that goes into reverse
whenever forward becomes too strained
has difficulty putting into words
the worry that's inner brained.

Sensing there's nothing to lose
when losing had nothing gained.
But I'm here stalking the numbers
and the wordings unexplained.

I even have those dreams,
waking up to an answering call.
One that doesn't exist
but whose meaning allows me to fall.

"Taking it personal" it said,
if my memory serves me right,
but the gift of me is old fashioned
as I write my reflections each night.

I am branded with the negative,
splitting my pain in two.
"There's a light at the end of the tunnel"
but only when shared... with who?

Perhaps when tomorrow comes
the answer lies in the "wait"
reminding myself to be patient
for dreams to become real in create.

M
(just trying to keep the words coming~~)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-07-24 04:11 PM

MzBliss~

'"There's a light at the end of the tunnel"
but only when shared... with who?'

"We'll leave the light on for you."
Share any ole time you want~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-07-24 04:18 PM

Thanks Marge.. you make me smile. I had a very long week of a college course...but one which hopefully, if I do my assignments correctly, will get me from "here to there".

(Been too tired to write or read or post much)

M

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2006-07-25 10:35 AM

I'm still waiting. But, my friend, I am sure you will have done fine. Only if we had someone to share that journey to the end with, we would reach that light alot quicker.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-07-25 11:43 AM

negative is not good for who you are

I say ditch it and keep on your track

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

5 posted 2006-07-25 11:49 AM

a very nice, thoughtful piece. I enjoyed it.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

6 posted 2006-07-30 10:55 PM

Your words reflect so much whether negative or positive. But I so enjoy the positive. I try to keep up on my reading at PIP but so few times have I stopped to comment on what I have read. My life as of late is the reason why. But not enough reason to avoid saying that your thoughts are wonderful and I wait to read more..

Positive and pleased to leave this comment..

Tommy

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