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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-07-24 03:11 AM



Content


he loves me
for who I am
not in who
I should be
and in him
I have found
a safe place

just some words cut from
the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2006 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2006-07-24 03:12 AM


* note to editor ed…yes yes yes I KNOW it should be whom and not who but that is why…you love me ...giggle
aziza
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2 posted 2006-07-24 03:21 AM


Here I thought the use of 'who' was artistic license. (grins) I think it sounds better and I really like this poem.  It's beautiful.

aziza

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-07-24 07:07 AM


nice place to be for sure
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-08-01 04:41 PM




"Who" flows, Helen. "Whom" just sits.
I like your choice. I love your poem.


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-08-01 05:11 PM


yes..a safe place to be.
*smiling at the comfort found here*

SusieQ
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6 posted 2006-08-01 11:05 PM



Very nice. I wish I could say the same.

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