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Blind Alley
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Blind Alley |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
(y'know, I could swear I posted this before...didn't come up in my search though. Ah, whatever...) Blind Alley It was a blue crystal heart she wore around her elegant neck just like blue rain in her eyes just another love's shipwreck I'm diving into the dark waters to find the ocean swells and robs me blind of all my senses crashing through outer defenses It was a blue and silver moon and I was hung out to dry now I've got nothing but time to think about you and I Through blind alleys I chased her down she left footsteps that hypnotized me just like a deer in the headlights and it's a crazy world for guys like me living like a sunflower, open for the sunrays and I don't wanna wilt without your say say you need me now break through to me and heal me somehow It's not like you to be uncaring after all the things we went through now I've got to make up your mind so stop all the messed up things you do baby Tough blind alleys I'm running like stray dog to find my lost kitten who mystifies me I feel like a sunken treasure not yet discovered a gold ring for her, a sword of broken lies for me this is the way it'll always be, I'm quite sure so I don't wanna wait or ever stop loving her she's too precious even when she's so cold and dangerous And whoa, oh don't lose yourself this is just a test for your mental health blind alleys, crooked allies, down the bend tell me, just what will I be feeling then? Emotions like oceans, drowning my frowning seriously ill the double bill that I play and I sing stop all forms of love on one thin dime now I've got nothing but time to think about anything but you and I "Is any song worth singing if it doesn't help?" -- Wilco, 'Wishful Thinking' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very captivating read! Worth to be seen again, even if you had posted it in the past. To me it sounds new and it sounds good! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, this one is new to these eyes, and I generally read whatever you post. I enjoy your portraits and the settings. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"living like a sunflower, open for the sunrays and I don't wanna wilt without your say" Great lines that I can feel. Thank you for sharing, I appreciated this one. Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of feelings...how does she feel...James |
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