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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-07-23 11:10 PM


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with limitations

passing fancies are as whims

barren and empty


©2006 by icebox

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© Copyright 2006 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Edward Grim
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1 posted 2006-07-23 11:13 PM


That sounds like something I would say. Maybe we share the same brain. Clearly you have the better half. Very good.    - Ed

I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person.

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-07-24 12:08 PM


I know an Arabian mare named Fancy.
Last spring she acted as if she was with foal
(three other mares in the pasture were with foal)
she sure looked the part, got all bloated up,
and everyone was sure she was having a foal,
but nothing was in there....a barren, empty womb.

So when you wrote about a passing fancy,
my mind jumped off on a tangent. LOL
Enjoyed, as always.

iliana
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3 posted 2006-07-24 03:43 AM


Agreed
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-07-24 07:06 AM


agreed indeed
Martie
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5 posted 2006-07-24 10:21 AM


icebox

So simple to say, this big truth.

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6 posted 2006-07-24 03:05 PM


IceBox~

~Your poetic thoughts
even with limitations
maturely ripen~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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7 posted 2006-07-24 05:25 PM


enjoyed
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