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Krawdad
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0 posted 2006-07-23 03:10 PM


               Beach Dream



               Last night
               I dreamed of that beach
               and that surf
               with all its colors

               I was there
               and you were there
               at my left side
               touching

               We sat quietly
               listening to the sea
               and watched the kaleidoscope
               of reflected sunset

               I turned
               to see the hues
               slip deeply
               into your eyes





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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-07-23 03:57 PM


This is beautiful ... and I wish you were both there too.

aziza

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2006-07-23 04:37 PM


just one
dream
away

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-07-23 04:53 PM


short, simple...

complete keeper!



thank you for a memory...


Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-07-23 05:31 PM


vicariously enjoying
the view, the moment

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-07-23 05:45 PM


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beautiful

The Lady
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The Southwest
6 posted 2006-07-23 11:13 PM




I love your beach, Krawdad. Thanks for the dream.


Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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7 posted 2006-07-23 11:15 PM


Groovy

I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person.

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