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Open Poetry #38

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-07-23 01:08 PM

Pity the windows

they hang heavy
with rain, crying

broken silhouettes
wait in repair shops
for reunification

lost and found
and back again

spring renews
winters thawing
flowerchildren

i danced through
fields of
fading wishes

then planted feet
on waiting ground

but i missed
your second coming

dizzy with desire,

between lavender petals
and tricolored
autumn embers,

now once again
you're gone.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-07-23 01:40 PM

InkyOne~
I'd say you don't miss a thing~

'Pity the windows

they hang heavy
with rain, crying'

THIS ... so creatively effective~
Uniquely YOU~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-07-23 02:19 PM

Michele, I adore your poetry and this one is no exception.

Love,
Margherita

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2006-07-23 04:01 PM

So beautiful.

i danced through
fields of
fading wishes

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-07-23 05:20 PM

Hugs

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-07-23 05:42 PM

God! That ending!

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