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Unforgiving
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Unforgiving lakes Unforgiving bogs Unfogiving mountains Unforgiving fog Unforgiving inlets Unforgiving hills Unforgiving tundra Unforgiving chills Unforgiving snow Unforgiving land Running out of luck with an unforgiving hand aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well that's depressing...gosh sounds like the night I had last night |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
The harder I worked the luckier I got When I nurtured my crops the roots didn't rot I wore warmer clothing when days there was snow The chills they all left when my fire did glow My tears from the inlet they watered each hill The fog on the mountains I'm loving now still I found the lake calm and there I did sail With all of my fortunes, one never could fail Enjoyed the read and interaction Aziza. May the hand of misfortune turn and then guide you to your happiness. Sincerely Rick |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is a sad one. It is actually written about a friend of mine who died this spring. He was out in a remote site and drowned when his bulldozer went through some ice on a pond. It's a sad story, but I had to write when I found out. aziza |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sorry to hear about your friend aziza, noone knows what tomorrow brings, but may I say, thank God for that. We must enjoy our friends while they are around us and reflect on their memories when they are gone. I have also lost friends and then I find friends anew. Have a nice day or night my friend and may you stay well. Friends Rick |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
aziza, Smiles. Well, I certainly think that you got the title right. Though simply written, your poem has so much more in depth meaning when accompanied by your brief description that followed later on. I'm so sorry for the loss of your friend who died in such a tragic way. God bless. -Bob |
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