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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2006-07-22 12:50 PM


Yesterday didn't feel so good
today my thoughts grew anxious
tomorrow I know will get better
because I know
that you'll be there on the other end
I don't mean to let
things grasp
and choke my dreams
You still hold me
You still love me
as I stand before you
with blood stained knees
it took me so long
to realize
that you were always there
I'm sorry
for not listening
I'm sorry
for running away
I thought I knew
what I was doing
I was determined
that I was okay
I drowned myself
in negativity laced
with God
I heard the angels
frequency
but too scared
that I was insane
if I admitted that
I felt their touch
as I stood outside
looking in at you
while crying
in the pouring rain
But you still held out your hand
you still loved me
regardless
of my insecurities
I'm still a work in progress
and not once did you ever judge me
I stand vunerable
drunk with fear
yesterday I didn't feel the same
today my heart grew insecure
tomorrow I know will get better
because you will be there...


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2006 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-22 04:15 PM


understanding
Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-07-22 04:56 PM


It's such a good feeling to know a special someone will be there for you.
Well said!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-07-22 05:33 PM


oh my, what a soulful write this is!
thank you for sharing this
heartbeat write!

aziza
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4 posted 2006-07-22 07:07 PM


Ahhh, I like this so much.  I am glad that you know that that person is here for you and I love how you shared your life with us.  Wonderful.

aziza

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