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Neeraja
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0 posted 2006-07-22 04:56 AM



MY DRIFTING SOUL...


Born with a longing
for eternal bliss
Desperately searching
forgotten where it is

Life takes me to places
where my Soul not want to go
bringing me thoughts
that I don't need to know

This is a lonely journey
so many roads ahead
making my bruised heart
heavier and sad

Which path am I to choose
Where is my Home... my Land?
Please... please my Lord
I need Your guiding hand...

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1 posted 2006-07-22 07:04 AM



Such an odd time,
when one's soul is adrift...

a lovely poem, Neeraja.

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2 posted 2006-07-22 08:15 AM


Neeraja~
I really feel the soft plea of this piece~
I also drift in thought so often~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2006-07-22 09:01 AM


Such a soft whisper of a write Neeraja.
Like a tearful prayer.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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4 posted 2006-07-22 11:44 AM


Just plain wonderful a great poem.
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5 posted 2006-07-22 04:56 PM


I relate
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