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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-07-21 08:00 PM




Imprinted Upon My Heart


Sometimes I read your words
and am left held in awe,
not only of how you manage
to master your craft,
but also of how
each word wraps itself around me
   captivating me.

*~Leaving me wanting       for more.....~*

More of the beauty encapsulated
in each word as I visualize it
in my minds eye view.
More of the sudden warmth felt
when reading words from your heart.

A smile from me      escapes
when I read the joy
there    in your eyes.

*~You whisper, thoughtfuly listening, I hear.~*

You have spoken softly
and left your words     forever
imprinted upon my heart.

(revised 7-21-06)

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-07-21 08:06 PM


Very lovely sweet lady~
Love ya,
Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland
2 posted 2006-07-21 08:07 PM


i whisper you a compliment of sweetness for your writing such a pretty poem

I am the two-toed wanderer

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-07-21 08:53 PM


Dear lady gentle...

This is indeed how many of our wonderful poets visit us...with great articulation, insight, and deep resources when their muses talk...it is a wonderful imprint...and a journey that so many miss...

if only those that miss, that they could care to read and interpret...the knowing...

well done, Poet.


Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-07-21 11:36 PM


another soft gentle heart write
imprinted, with honesty

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-07-22 05:22 PM


well done!!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2006-07-22 08:15 PM


GentlestOne~
YOU are imprinted on my heart~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2006-07-23 04:39 AM


You write what I feel so often in here.  Thank you.

aziza

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
8 posted 2006-07-23 04:44 AM


Ah... this is so sweet...

Neeraja

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
9 posted 2006-07-23 04:47 AM


Your words reflect what I often feel in here.  Thank you.

aziza

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
10 posted 2006-07-24 07:32 AM


Beautiful words that find me totally agreeing.

... the sudden warmth, the smile... EXACTLY.

Thank you for this, dear Donna.

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
11 posted 2006-07-24 08:49 AM


may they stay forever
where they find their
sacred spot today

BugBuggy
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since 2005-12-19
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michigan
12 posted 2006-07-26 07:07 PM


that was so very nicely put really enjoyed reading

BugBuggy

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
13 posted 2006-07-27 12:48 PM


Just beautiful.
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
14 posted 2006-07-27 08:51 AM


Beautiful.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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