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themute
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0 posted 2006-07-21 02:00 AM


And now my love for you will never die
I say these words I do not cry them out
But in a whisper in my mind, I try
For the whole thought reasons, I love without
Answers and wise words romantically said
Nor comparing to sunsets or flowers
Nor is my wish for us two to the bed
I wish for us two to sit and live hours
I wish for three words so simply said
Whispered by you in the time before dawn
I wish in your eyes to tell me truer  
I wish that your words would tell me the truth  
I know you do love me because it’s true
I know you do love me because it’s you


I am the two-toed wanderer

[This message has been edited by themute (07-21-2006 03:02 AM).]

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aziza
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1 posted 2006-07-21 03:34 AM


Very heartfelt.  I enjoyed reading this; it made me feel happy for you.

aziza

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2 posted 2006-07-21 08:20 AM


very nice
this made me smile

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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3 posted 2006-07-21 09:33 AM


Matthew~

Such a softly whispered on come of dawn this is~

'I wish for three words so simply said
Whispered by you in the time before dawn'


*sighs*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 2006-07-21 09:39 AM


Hi Matthew,


Indeed this is a beautiful whisper, especially when two can talk and live the hours....

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

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