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zaz
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since 2006-07-09
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0 posted 2006-07-20 10:08 AM


My question to you is simple I think,
Here at the bar as we sit and drink.

Parrots screech by as they head for the trees,
I watch your dress move way past the knees.

Legs long and limber tanned to their peak,
Just sitting by you makes me dizzy and weak.

I ask a beautiful face glowing in the setting sun,
knowing what comes next will be lasting and fun.

Your hand grazes mine acceptance is real,
Green eyes twinkling, shares what I feel.

Walking to the beach, surf crashing away,
Our love grows with night, soon we will play.


© Copyright 2006 Thad Geer - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-07-20 10:39 AM


suprise & rainbows
delightful read


INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
2 posted 2006-07-20 02:48 PM


Delightful read....thank you.  

If only life were as casual as that
but NSA(?)...there is no such fact.

INclan

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2006-07-20 08:00 PM


A good line indeed...
Breakfast is everything.
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-07-20 08:11 PM


Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-07-20 11:18 PM




Delightful zaz!

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
6 posted 2006-07-20 11:35 PM


i enjoyed the read quite a bit as well

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

zaz
Junior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 26

7 posted 2006-07-21 09:36 AM


Thanks, may all your beachwalks be perfect.
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