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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-07-20 08:10 AM


I wouldn't mind a unicorn
if you wouldn't mind the hounds
or the feel of a steal bars

when you were the guardess

pale in comparison
to the sins you protected
from becoming addictions

to another kind of idolatry
where the crime is desired
more than the salvation

when you were unguarded

in the frenzy of your fantasy
of sipping the milkman's wares
before they spoiled from spill

on the backside of a widow's window
beachside to panting afternoons
where trembling skin knows the sand

will worship intentional indentations


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daark


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-20-2006 08:51 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-07-20 08:51 AM



The fantastic reality
of real fantasy...

you wind the streams well, Sir.


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-07-20 08:52 AM


ms sun...thanks lady friend, just a window view of silver strand on a backroom afternoon...
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-07-20 10:38 AM


wonderful as always
  good morning

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-07-20 11:05 AM


thank ya ms (grin)
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5 posted 2006-07-20 04:46 PM


yeah now thats some good writing there , deep and real , liked it

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

Edward Grim
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6 posted 2006-07-20 05:51 PM


Very spiffy indeed

I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person.

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-07-20 10:45 PM




"in the frenzy of your fantasy
of sipping the milkman's wares
before they spoiled from spill"

I love these lines Stranger. How DO you do it? I mean I know you do it well, but how?

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-07-21 07:18 AM


Auj W, thanks so much for the read

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EdGrim, humble thanks amigo

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lady one, thanks lady friend...the words just seem to squirt onto the page sometimes..might be lack of motor control or something..

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9 posted 2006-07-22 05:09 PM


oh my
but now my feet are warmed
by the sands of silverstrand
memories..
and so, a new post
for you

siver stranded /pip/Forum95/HTML/001856.html

Martie
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10 posted 2006-07-23 01:43 PM


DS

Kacy's post sent me here to see her inspire...it would be you.

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11 posted 2006-07-24 10:44 AM


nice view, dark one

beLLe

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2006-07-24 11:39 AM


ms Kacy, humble thanks
and yes I see your footprints
in the sand

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ms martie, such a small world
when we walk it together, thanks for the eyes


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bel1e one, thank  you for the read and comments

seraphin
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13 posted 2006-07-24 11:09 PM


This is flawless. I love it.
Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2006-07-25 07:35 AM


ms sera'  humble thanks lady friend
Ceinwyn
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15 posted 2006-08-01 12:24 PM


my mind is wandering here....and I don't think I'm in a hurry to get it back

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2006-08-01 07:04 AM


ms cein' let it stay awhile...thanks
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