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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2006-07-19 05:12 PM



Looking for a comfortable ride
afraid of bumpy roads
sore from the trip
happy on arrival
so much said for routes
err destinations
little said for how it came to be
how trips are hastened


Looking for your way
wanting to run the show
sore to agree on successors,
happy to keep the reigns
power gves meaning
to oval lives
agasp
remain within grasp

move along
along as you're strung
others steer you in line
whether on the ride
or about to be succeeded
looking for a comfortable ride
seeing only control within reach
until you reach goals
so much for the destination
sore on arrival.


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-07-20 03:10 AM


sometimes there just is no comfortable ride
but 'sore' isn't so bad really
as long as there's a hot tub at the end  

good to read you Martin

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2006-07-20 06:11 PM


don't know many smooth rides myself


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