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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2006-07-19 11:06 AM



I Had To Set You Straight


Those words you said to me
I still remember very clear
You always thought you could
Instill into me a lot of fear

There were those times when I
Had to pull you off of cloud nine
Bring your ego down a bit, and
Erase those thoughts from your mind

Somehow I had to set you straight
As to who you were talking to
It wasn’t always easy for me
To get it through to you

Your ego was way too high
Always telling yourself
Then telling me the same thing
That I couldn’t make it be myself

So little did you know
I never do give up
Even when there are days
When life seems way too tough

True, the struggles have been many
Still, I think I have done okay
So, climb down off that cloud
I am regaining what you took away

There were many times when I
Wished I had never left you
Then, I would remember, once again
All the things I had been through

To go through all that, again
I  would never want to do
Even though the struggles are many
I can make it here, without you

7-19-06



© Copyright 2006 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-19 11:13 AM


you go!

What strength in this! I sure need some of that sometimes...so I'm putting this in my library!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-07-19 11:27 AM


boy this tugs at the ol memories...big time
my sentiments exactly

wonderful and giving ya a big hug for the place you've come to...ya look back and kinda wonder why you spent so much time crying...?  Well, at least I did...

thanks for sharing

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
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3 posted 2006-07-19 11:39 AM


YOU GO GIRL!
*hugs tight*
I know how hard it can be
and can relate

your strength is showing
and it's beautiful

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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4 posted 2006-07-19 01:26 PM


This poem just reeks of strength and determination.  Hang in there!

aziza

Enchantress
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5 posted 2006-07-19 01:29 PM


you tell him Sue!!
Way to go gal...you know how proud I am of you!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

garysgirl
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6 posted 2006-07-19 11:41 PM


Sue, I am so proud of how much strength you
have now!! You have really grown, Sweetie.
This poem proves just how much.

You have been through a lot and there were
probably lots of times you thought of just
giving up. But, the important thing is that
you didn't and you have just come so far, Lady!!
With love and heart hugs,

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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2006-07-20 01:08 AM


Keep going...James
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2006-07-20 06:58 AM


I am regaining what you took away

~*~




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