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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-19 01:30 AM


The heat caresses my supine body
as I lay quietly, wishing for just a bit more sleep
and longingfor the smell of salt air and the kiss of a sea breeze.

...

aziza


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-19 03:41 AM


how nice those would be indeed
divine chaos
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2 posted 2006-07-19 08:52 AM


*smiles*  a sea breeze would be so nice today .. I love the smell of the ocean

~*Sheli*~

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~Aristophanes~

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3 posted 2006-07-19 08:58 AM


That sounds sooo nice.  I get up at 430 for work.  What a nice thought for the morning.  I'm on my way now....

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


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4 posted 2006-07-19 08:59 AM



I would enjoy those scents and sounds again...


Rick
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5 posted 2006-07-19 09:06 AM


The heat caresses my supine body
as I lay quietly, wishing for just a bit more sleep
and longing for the smell of salt air and the kiss of a sea breeze.

But I rise to the calling, still in dream of yesterdays and peace
I catch the wave and the ride to my morning
The day I meet, my demons slay and my angel seek.

Much enjoyed my friend, thanks for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

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6 posted 2006-07-19 10:11 AM


The heat caresses my supine body
as I lay quietly, wishing for just a bit more sleep
and longingfor the smell of salt air and the kiss of a sea breeze.
now I long for it to...miss the ocean, whole bunches...and the seas, so alluring, so mysterious, peaceful, both deep and full of insight...

lovely poem...

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2006-07-20 04:05 AM


Thank you all for sharing your thoughts and reading this poem.

xoxoxo
aziza

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