on the shores of Lake Waban

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2006-07-19 12:34 PM

on the shores of
Lake Waban
they poetized
he whispered
da mi basia mille
and she smiled a thousand kisses
in a very
very
proper manner

she replied
I pay--in satin cash--
thanks to Miss Dickinson

hours rode by
made harder by the moment
a lone fixed star watched
shivering
breeze
loosed yellow locks
to fly sea lanes

risen from the dust
he murmured
I see dirty in your eyes

she righted the grass
straightened the world
rose
and sighed

I don’t believe those words
are Wellesley approved

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

1 posted 2006-07-19 12:39 PM

Catullus & Emily would be proud. Wonderful write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-07-19 12:46 PM

Thank you Tina.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-07-19 01:07 AM

outstanding!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-07-19 01:09 AM

Thank you Dixie!

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2006-07-19 01:51 AM

I love this.

aziza

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2006-07-19 07:09 AM

and here I went to tijuana tech
but i did get my snow cone certification

enjoyed the pen lady one

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2006-07-19 07:43 AM

You are taking on the form
of mesmerizing...

keep it up.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

8 posted 2006-07-19 08:59 AM

I love it, Lady

awesome write

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2006-07-19 09:15 AM

Fantastic write!!!
Love this!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2006-07-19 10:00 AM

very much enjoyed this...and smiled

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2006-07-19 10:07 AM

giggling with delight
at this penning
and adjusting my shorts
loved the dirt/grass visuals

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2006-07-19 03:18 PM

OhKate~
Lady, I adore the all of this penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2006-07-20 01:26 AM

Thank you aziza.

Stranger, snow cones are very important
for lickin’ when it’s hot…
Thank you.

Thank you Karilea. I value your opinion.

Thank you so much Sheli.

Thank you LeeJ. Smile.

Get your shorts adjusted Kacy. Thank you for your giggles.

Thank you so much Marge!

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