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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2006-07-19 12:25 PM


Pain ever present, in the back of my head
Pain ever present, can't get out of bed
Pain ever present, can't sleep a wink
Pain ever present, can't even think
Pain ever present, my unwanted friend
Pain ever present, there is no end
Pain ever present, it is my fate
Pain ever present, Pain on my slate


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The Lady
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-07-19 12:37 PM



This makes me feel so sad Tina. Good poem but oh, so sad.

aziza
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2 posted 2006-07-19 01:52 AM


Very good poem.  I have friends with Fibro and it sounds like sheer hell.  Thank you for expressing this for so many.

aziza

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-07-19 03:40 AM


ouch
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2006-07-19 07:44 AM



My friend knows this...
her "centers" are babies
and laughter.

Be well, m'friend.


divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
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dancing 'neath the moon
5 posted 2006-07-19 09:00 AM


owie .. good, but sad

*leaves gentle hugs*

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

TinaTrivett
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6 posted 2006-07-19 07:57 PM


Thanks all...yes, today is an 'owie' day.
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