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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be

0 posted 2006-07-18 08:43 PM


Sitting at my computer
Thoughts of seep elude me
Fear of the dreams that may come
Keep me awake.

The night noises echo
Through my open window
Beckoning me to enter
Their deep darkness.

Silently the hours go by
But they feel like mere minutes
In my quest for untroubled sleep
My mind hinders me.

I feel myself beginning to tire
I am slowly winning this battle
Although I still fear the dreams
I succumb to unconciousness.

The dreams I fear
Slow begin to invade
My sleep deprived mind
I struggle through the painless ones
and agonize through the more meaningful ones.

At last they fade
I have survived another round
I sleep peacefully for the rest of the night
With a nagging promise...

They will be back.



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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-07-18 08:46 PM


I have these times too and my heart goes out to you.  Some of my best poetry comes from nights of staying awake.  Good poem and thank you for sharing.

aziza

TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 569

2 posted 2006-07-18 09:52 PM


My sleep suffers a lot. I can empathize. Nice write. Thank you.
divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
3 posted 2006-07-18 10:07 PM


Sleep deprivation does make for good poetry sometimes.  Enjoyed the read

~*sheli*~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2006-07-19 03:43 AM


welcome back!

enjoyed this write and I can relate well

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