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Open Poetry #38
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2006-07-18 03:57 AM


Kinder Eyes

Yes, I want to be
less controlling
and critical.
Yes, I want to be
more loving
and caring,
accepting and
forgiving.
I'm ready to
see the world
thru different eyes.
I've had enough
of judgemental thoughts
controlling me.
Through kinder eyes
a brighter world
I could see.

JamesLee
17July
2006
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
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1 posted 2006-07-18 04:05 AM

I wonder if kinder eyes make the world more beautiful?  Again, I like your poem.  You say what you say well, and then you make me think.  Not a bad thing, I'd say.

aziza
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-07-18 06:10 AM

you already see more clearly now
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