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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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0 posted 2006-07-18 01:31 AM


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The Silent Poet

18 July 2006


Where did it go
that means to want to share
Like who gives a damn
and was there reason to care

Left alone, empty to facts
thought about tomorrow
but unable to live
The poet and their words
for others in ways freely to give

So came to an end
that chapter that did begin
Just trying to be fair
however patience grows thin

No more passing shadows
no more enchanting moments to think
So it comes down to heavenly angels
never, never another pip to the core drink


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-07-18 04:13 AM


I haven't been here that long, but this sounds so final.  I hope it isn't.

aziza

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-07-18 10:16 AM


there will always be passing shadows, my friend
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-07-18 10:19 AM



~May you always have enchanting moments~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-07-18 10:36 AM


sending well wishes for a super day,
thanks for writing

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
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5 posted 2006-07-18 05:27 PM


I know I have been posting less on pip and like most others I do not always have the time to comment on other poems, or what I do write in a comment is seen as being offencive by some.

When honestly has always been the best policy. Being the 'zero poet' does not feel fair either

thank you all for being there and here for me on pip



a poet who cares

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