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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-18 12:57 PM


I sit in the big armchair
the one by the window
with my feet up in the rocker
and eat chilled chocolate pudding.
Idly I think
something is lost in translation
if we don't rub it on our faces
or mousse our hair into sticky spikes.
When did life become a set of rules
a list of what to do and not to do?
When did we lose the wild abandon
of painting our skin with chocolate pudding?

aziza

© Copyright 2006 Alison - All Rights Reserved
divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
1 posted 2006-07-18 01:07 AM


who says I don't still do that?
*grins*

~*S*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2006-07-18 04:10 AM


Wish I had of bought that chocolate pudding I was thinking about buying last night...James
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-07-18 06:16 AM


now i have a craving

I used to eat the Jello pudding pops before they stopped making them...I miss those

Potatobunny
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since 2006-07-17
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4 posted 2006-07-18 07:34 AM


I thought the poem was so great! It expressed your emotions so well that you don't always follow the rules or care what people thing. If I am totally wrong about that, please tell me LOL!
Rick
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Victoria, Australia
5 posted 2006-07-18 07:48 AM


When life brought guilt and childhood was a memory. Growing up is forgetting what real enjoyment was.
Aziza, enjoyed the read my friend, a bit hungry though. Take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2006-07-18 05:00 PM


Glad ya'll enjoyed this.  Maybe we should get together and just indulge with wild abandon!

aziza

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