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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-18 12:49 PM


If I knew how to write songs
I'd sing one for you
Or maybe write out my words
in a poem.
But all that I have
are the words in my heart
and this love for you
in my soul.

aziza


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-07-18 01:01 AM


methinks you just wrote
a heartsong

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-07-18 06:10 AM


very sweet
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-07-18 07:18 AM



Methinks Kacy
is correct.

I hear the music,
don't you?




Rick
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4 posted 2006-07-18 07:34 AM


aziza, maybe we should try to write one together my friend, if we use the magic from your soul I am sure we will have a hit. Enjoyed the read tonight, thank you and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-07-18 05:02 PM


Thank you for taking the time to stop and comment.  I treasure all your words.

Rick, I have read some beautiful lyrics you have written.  Now, we just need to buy kazoos and write the music!

aziza

poettothecars
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6 posted 2006-07-18 05:54 PM


beautiful words to sing by

a poet who cares

Rick
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7 posted 2006-07-23 06:26 PM


Aziza, it would be great to write some music and a song, thanks for putting up your hand to give a hand, I would enjoy that.

Sincerely
Rick

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-07-23 11:09 PM





Lovely aziza.

Go for the duet, you two.


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