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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-07-17 10:24 AM


The Simple

The simple is not a dimple
And multi is more then simple
I stand besides a wishing well
Seeking peace wherein my dwell

My walls are made of mist and gist
But I’m quite sure they do exist
Horizons seem perpetual
But proof evades the actual

The enzyme is our birth and prime
That sails upon the river time
It is a moment in the sun
That lives a moment till its done

It lives again another form
Another start another norm
Another spice into the soup
Another circle in the loop

And I await the taste of done
The all encompassing of one



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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
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1 posted 2006-07-17 10:44 AM


Every one of your poems is exquisite. Like a rare painting in a museum, or the first colorful rose that appears on the bush in spring. Thank you for sharing them with us.
XOx Uriah xOX
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2 posted 2006-07-17 10:54 AM


There is sooooo much I want to say  LOL    But...I wont.   I'm too busy singing...
"On the baby's knuckle   On the baby's knee  Where will the baby's dimple be?     While I play the clinging vine...  "
::smiles::     Wonderful write! (((Sir Sy)))

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3 posted 2006-07-17 11:51 AM


It is a moment in the sun
That lives a moment till its done

It lives again another form
Another start another norm

You sure got THAT right!

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-07-17 01:29 PM


Seymour~
In this poetic loop ....
weave it all together ... JUST RIGHT~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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