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SmartChick
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0 posted 2006-07-16 02:25 PM




When You Are Hurting


The things you say and do
Show how much you care
I have no doubt my friend
You will always be there

Anytime I’m feeling low
When things seem to go wrong
As they so often do, I know
You will help me stand strong

Together, you and I can face
Whatever comes my way
There is no doubt in my mind
You are here to stay

It is clear for me to see
As each day comes and goes
How you really feel, because
It always shows

Just take my hand, my friend
I will always be there for you
From now until the end of time
Just to  help you get through

For when you are in pain
My heart always hurts too
In spite of our differences
I will always be there for you

7-16-06




© Copyright 2006 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-07-16 02:33 PM


Friends should revere another's differences...
that is what makes them interesting!



Enjoyed this one, Sue!

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2 posted 2006-07-16 02:51 PM


SuzieQ~
That's what ... that's what ... that's what friends are for~

LOVE this penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2006-07-16 03:09 PM


A lovely description of true friendship.  Joyce
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4 posted 2006-07-18 03:51 AM


Nice...at times of great need I made some great friends...James
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5 posted 2006-07-18 04:09 AM


Your poem is a good definition of friendship.  You look like you would be a good friend, and you write like you would be a good friend.  Seems to be a basic addition problem - Looks + Write = Good Friend.

aziza

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6 posted 2006-07-18 06:06 AM


I should take that hand and lead you to where the big fish are LOL

lovely write Sue
very touching

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7 posted 2006-07-18 10:27 PM


Enjoyed this one Sue.
And...that's what friends are for.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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8 posted 2006-07-20 02:29 AM


some reason, I needed this again this morning
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