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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2006-07-16 08:44 AM


Heron flies
on auburn skies
misty water calling me home

Magnolias blooming
bullfrogs crooning
misty water calling me home

Georgia heat
cool barefeet
misty water calling me home

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scorpio
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right...there
1 posted 2006-07-16 09:02 AM


Very well written.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-07-16 10:08 AM


Tina,
A delight to read.

aziza
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3 posted 2006-07-16 10:22 AM


Very, very nice.
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4 posted 2006-07-16 11:30 AM


Tina~
This was a pleasant delight of a read~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
5 posted 2006-07-16 12:05 PM


loverly, those waters always seem to call us home, eh?  *smiles*

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2006-07-16 12:12 PM


This left me with a peaceful wistful feeling.
Well done,
Hugs~Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

TinaTrivett
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7 posted 2006-07-16 04:40 PM


Thanks all. If I knew how to post a pic on here, I'd show one of my home on the water. You'd see why I love it so much.
The Lady
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-07-16 06:06 PM



"Georgia heat
cool barefeet
misty water calling me home"

Ahhh Tina, it's so good to be from Georgia but I sure miss it. Thanks for soothing my heart a little.

TinaTrivett
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9 posted 2006-07-16 06:07 PM


Your welcome...and I bet Georgia misses you.
The Lady
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The Southwest
10 posted 2006-07-16 06:10 PM



It must, 'cause it sure keeps calling me.


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