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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-16 01:12 AM


I won't wear your crown of thorns
I am not Jesus
and I don't turn the other cheek
It all comes down to one small thing
We all hurt
and I won't absorb your pain.
I have already careened down that highway
pulverizing those in my way
I won't wear your crown of thorns
or hang from a cross that is yours to bare
...
aziza

© Copyright 2006 Alison - All Rights Reserved
themute
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since 2006-05-08
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Maryland
1 posted 2006-07-16 01:35 AM


what did he do to you, mearly joshing 'twas what it was intended for

I am the two-toed wanderer

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-07-16 01:47 AM


How much time do you have?  (grins)  
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-07-16 05:19 PM





Ahhhh aziza, you too? Turn down the next crown that comes your way, unless it has diamonds.


OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2006-07-16 05:30 PM


Good for you, girl!  Loved your poem, too.

- Owl

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-07-16 07:03 PM


Thank you.  

aziza

Ceinwyn
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6 posted 2006-07-31 08:20 PM


Amazing...reminds me of how I feel about my ex...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

seraphin
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7 posted 2006-07-31 10:01 PM


"I won't wear your crown of thorns
or hang from a cross that is yours to bare"

This is fantastic.

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